Great with little mistakes
Loved the animation and the story. I had trouble hearing the voices over the music at times. The last thing that caught my attention was the misspelling of watching at the end. You've done a very good piece of work to get put down by one misspelling! XD
Also the timing of sound effects and music was really well done!
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